Wednesday, January 27, 2016

Poetry Response 1/27/16

"Alone" By Edgar Allen Poe


From childhood's hour I have not been

As others were; I have not seen

As others saw; I could not bring

My passions from a common spring

From the same source I have not taken

My sorrow; I could not awaken 

My heart of joy the same tone;

And all I loved, I loved alone.

Then- in my childhood, in the dawn

Of a most stormy life- was drawn

From every depth of good and ill

The mystery which binds me still:

From the torrent, or the fountain;

From the red cliff of the mountain,

From the sun that round me rolled,

In its autumn tint of gold,

From the lightning in the sky

As it passed me flying by,

From the thunder and the storm, 

And the cloud that took the form

(When the rest of Heaven was blue)

Of a demon in my view. 

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The poem that I chose to write is "Alone," by Edgar Allen Poe. I chose this poem for various reasons. It's unique compared to other poems that I have read, its darker; it expresses so much through the simplest word choice. It mainly makes me question myself and ask what the mystery is behind it that made him write this type of poem. This poem expresses about his feelings/beings alone and I think many people can sometimes relate to that. He says stuff about the difference from what other people (children) saw and were doing compared to him. It's a dark poem, but it's truthful, not all people have happy childhoods and I think that's what mainly gets to me about this poem. 
I think this poem is about his childhood and him feeling alone. It seems to me that his childhood was very dark and thats what made him express intense/dark points of view in the poem. He uses small words, but they give a lot of meaning to the poem. This poem seems like he was different from other children in his time and so when he said "When the rest of heaven was blue...Of a demon in my view, " it makes me think what the demon sort of represented, so it sort of got me thinking that it could be about a parent, family member, or just a person in general. I think the author wrote this poem because he needed to let out his feelings. I think that he was passionate about it and thought that it was better to share it with everyone else instead of hiding it away. Edgar Allen Poe, I believe wrote this poem to sort of send a message of some sort to a person or himself. It shows what is to be alone through an intense concept. 
This poem reminds me of children around the world, who may feel or are all alone. They do things by themselves and what Edgar said, "And all I loved, I loved alone," made me wonder if thats what other people whether they are adults or children feel at times. I think about children mainly in the world because this poem mainly is about his childhood, so others could possibly have the same childhood or similar to his. This poem also made me think of a time when my cousin and I got lost one time when we were younger in a store. We got scared that we were left alone, it was terrifying and was an awful feeling. It made us feel like something bad was gonna happen, so I can of feel like when it says "of a demon in my view," that it sort of represents what he is afraid of. 
I drew this picture because it was what I visualized as I read this poem. I drew it because of the last three lines, which are, "And the cloud that took the form (When the rest of Heaven was blue) Of a demon in my view." Those lines were mainly the ones that got my attention about this poem because it it really "dark" and it kind of makes it harder to understand the meaning of them compared to rest of lines in the poem.  

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Friday, January 22, 2016

2nd Quarter Reflection Blog

Prompt: 1). Of the books you have read this quarter, which was your favorite? Why? 2). In what area do you think you made your biggest improvements in English Language Arts? 3). What have you learned about the world? 

         I've read various books this quarter. They were all amazing, unique, and had different lessons within them that have taught me so much. If I had to choose one book that I really enjoyed reading, it would have to be the Time Keeper by Mitch Albom because it taught me the most. It was different from other books because it shows how a man created time without knowing how big of a discovery it was. It shows how even though he made this discovery, it made him pay a price, but in the end he found out that "time" itself didn't matter, but it matters what you do with it. The Time Keeper, is the greatest book that I have ever read in my opinion, it might not be so logical in the end, but it makes you open-minded about all kinds of possibilities. It makes you believe that anything can happen in just a matter of seconds and that makes you even more grateful for the "time" that you do have rather than the "time" that you don't. 

        I think that I have made many improvements in ELA, but the biggest improvement that I have made would have to be in writing narratives. It taught me different ways to write better with using more detail in my narratives rather than not using any at all. It gave me a different perspective that I can write with in order to change my writing style and try something different from what I am use to. It let me explore my mind in order to express myself more. I love writing and being able to learn more about it really makes me want to reach for higher expectations for myself. I want to be a journalist and in order to get there, I need to keep improving more than I have already have to reach it. I hope to improve more in English Language Arts and learn new things as well. 

        I have learned many things about the world, that I didn't know much about before. I am able to understand why certain topics that deal with world is important for us to know because it benefits how we live and the events that will or do occur. I learned many things about gun right laws and some of the crimes that have to do with them. There are various things that I learned, but there is still plenty more to learn as well because the world keeps moving and stuff keeps happening. The world never stops revolving around the sun, it never stops spinning either, but I learned that some of the bad stuff that happens in the world, we can stop. There is so much that we can improve about our society. 


       

Wednesday, January 20, 2016

Blog for Week 1-20-16

99 Days by: Katie Cotugno
Pages: 1-Finished
Genre: Fiction

       The book that I have chosen for this blog, which I have just finished reading, is 99 Days by Katie Cotugno. The genre of this book is fiction, so it is a made up story. The main character of this book is a girl named Molly Barlow, who used to be kind, outgoing, and had many friends is now quiet, kept to herself, and doesn't have many friends. This story takes place in Molly's tiny hometown, Star Lake. There are various moods that go very well with this book, for example, heartbreak, anxiousness, and excitement, but the main mood that the book evolves around is heartbreak. The conflict in the book is between Molly and three of her childhood friends that are all siblings. Her friends names are Julia, Patrick, and Gabe Donnelly. The conflict they are having all started in Molly, Julia, and Patrick's sophomore year of Highschool, while Gabe was in his freshman year of college. Molly and Patrick were childhood sweethearts, until she cheated on him with his brother Gabe and that is when it all turned for the worst. The theme is mainly betrayal and friendship because of Molly bretraying Pratrick and ruining her friendship with her friends Julia and Imogen. 
      I really enjoyed reading this book. I liked the way the author wrote the book with so much detail about what happened in the past between Molly and her friends. The book 99 Days is the type of book that is very hard to forget, the style, which is written in detail of what Molly did on each day for the 99 days that she is going to be in Star Lake before going to College. The main thing that I most remember about the book is the relationship that Molly has with all her friends throughout and at the end of book. I would recommend this book to anyone who enjoys reading books that are filled with intense amounts of details and has a complicated plot to it, that you would need to be open-minded in order to get the concept of it. I think people should go out and get this book because it is something different from other books that have a similar theme and mood. Also I think they should go out and get the book because I really enjoyed it and I think others would to as well.